….. And the wind will blow
Sky shall bear iridescent glow
The birds will croon
The trees will sway
But I would drift away
Not sustaining the brunt of fate
Like a candle in the wind
Like a tender plant in heavy rains
I would embrace the darkness and detach from the soil
Blinded, blended and to be earthed leaving this turmoil
Sympathies, agonies, sorrow will pour in
Eyes would bear tears of farewell
Words will flow like melodies exalting me
Will I be there to hear your notions
I would be sleeping unaware of your emotions
Remember me with every breeze that will touch your face
Forgive me for every ruffle I may have caused
Pardon me for every little scribbles I may have on your wall
Never let me go lost in your archives
For may be there, I can eternally survive
© Samreen Asad 2021
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88 replies on “When I Am Gone”
Heart Wrenching
Beautifully crafted words 👏
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Thank you so much bhaijan 🥰❤️
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Dear Samreen Asad
I have to
left at my end
that I
in my body
will perish in the dust
the wind the sky will remain
as if i never been
people will be as usual
wake up in the morning
and render their services to the day
the stars, the moon and the sun
become my shadow
that I threw in my life forgot
the dream will withdraw
into nothing
where he accompanied me day and night
my destiny
my lived life
in the blue sky
in thunderstorms
fade on the high seas
all my evil and other things
my soul becomes my eyes
my ears
my hands
my whole body
me into the eternal night
finally shut off the darkness
all my senses
Feelings
my sensations
my thoughts
my words
everything me
at nature me
i touched
becomes in the last embers
my last breath
fade away in ashes and smoke
only being is eternal
of all creatures
in real life
Best regards
Hans Gamma
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Wonderfully penned down Hans, indeed what will be left behind will be memories, everything else would fade away in ashes and smoke.
Thank you soo much for your time and beautiful poem😊
Have a good day🌺✨🌻
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Loved it!!!
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Thank you so much for reading, am so happy you liked it😊 Have a wonderful week ahead🙂🌺🌻
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Same to you!
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Thank you so much dear🙂
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And the wind will blow
And the birds would chirp
And they would sing their carol
To the ever so poetic
And my beautiful niece
Samreen
Asad 💖🤗💖
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Oh thank you sooo much my ever so kind dearest Uncle 😊💖 your words always means so much to me. 🤗
Have a wonderful week ahead✨🌺🌻
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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Thank you so much dear as always for sharing 😊 Have a lovely week ahead 🌺🌻✨
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Welcome… and Thank you so much
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Beautiful. Those who love us will never let go of our happy memories. A lovely poem, Samreen.
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Oh thank you sooo much dear for always reading and leaving such kind words for me to cherish. 😊❤️
Hope you and your son are well🙂
Have a lovely week ahead 🌻✨🌺
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It is a daughter:) Yes, we are well. Thanks so much, Samreen. How is your boy?
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Oh dear, sorry, I thought a son 🙂 My boy is good, keeping me on my toes all the time. 😀
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Super. They keep us active, don’t they? though it is a little tiring at times…:)))
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Yes, dear for sure but too much activity as you said is often tiring at times 😀But then, this is their time, once they will grow up we would be just sitting and laughing remembering their actions. ❤️
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Yes:) and their innocence will slowly disappear. That is a must if they have to grapple with the competitive world…but we will miss it all the same.
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Yes dear, we surely will miss their little funny acts😊 Oh yes dear, that’s a must. 🙂
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nice
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Thank you so much for your time reading and leaving a kind comment. 🙂😊 Have a great week ahead 🌻✨🌺
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you welcome
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For every little scribble I may have on your wall, what a master piece!! The imprint of our deeds, words and writings, etched in other’s heart is what really going to remain after us. Well crafted one❤
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Thank you sooo much Mousumi for your time reading and your wonderful appreciation 🥰 You made my day🙂 Indeed, that’s what will remain🤗
Have a lovely week ahead ✨🌺🌻
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Thanks Samreen for your good wish. I also wish for you happy weeks, months and years ahead of you ❤
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Aww so sweet of you dear, wishing you and your family the very same😊🥰❤️🤗
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Thankyou 😊🥰
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❤️🤗❤️
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Lovely poem about the people we loved and always stay in our memories. Always loved to read your phrases.
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Thank you sooo much for always giving my poems a read and taking out your valuable time to comment. Really means so much. ❤️❤️❤️ Have a lovely week ahead 🤗🤗🤗
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Wonderfully romantic!
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Thank you soo much Malcolm for your time and kind words, means so much. 😊 Have a good day 🌺✨🌻
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This is so beautiful Samreen. Filled with emotion and touching. ❤
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Oh thank you soo much Jessica for reading, I am so happy you liked the poem. ❤️🥰
Hope you and your son are doing well😊 Have a lovely week ahead 🤗❤️
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We’re doing great. Wishing you and your family a wonderful week as well 🙂
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Such beautiful words that touch my heart deeply through the winds of time as we travel and give life and love till eternity. So beautiful to wake up to! ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗 Beautiful Samreen! ❤️
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Oh Cindy, thank you as always for your ever so wonderful words of encouragement, appreciation, support and love. 🥰🥰🥰💝💝
Indeed, our deeds will be remembered after us, will bring a smile to someone’s face if good and a little discomfort to someone’s thoughts if bad.
So it’s us who need to chose how we want to be remembered 😊🤗
Have a wonderful sleep and may you have a lovely day and the week ahead, love and hugs❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗
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You are so welcome Samreen! It’s so true that words and deeds are powerful and we do get to choose how we show up in life and the impact we want to have on others and ourselves. It truly was beautiful! I’m heading to bed soon and appreciate the lovely good night wishes. You have a wonderful day ahead. Love and hugs back to you!!! ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Thank you soo much Cindy for your love and wishes🤗🤗🤗 ❤️❤️❤️🥰
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You are most welcome!!!❤️❤️❤️🙏
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SMiLes Poetry Dances Sings
Foot Prints in Sand
Every Wave Will
Wash Over Creating
New Shores
Samreen
Breath
Sees to
BREaTHE SoMe
More GRains Sands
HoldS HandS On Beaches Ever More now
SMiLes My FRiEnD Some Hope For Singularity
Fitting Dead WordS iN Machines SoME ThinK NoW
OTHeRS
STiLL
Dance
Sing
Poetry
Free
Beaches
Hold HandS AGAiN
Every Grain Sand
Sugar White See
All Emerald Waves
Breathing Sea Oats Breeze
Sea Gulls Spiraling Souls Sun
High TWiLiGHT Moon Full STill RiSinG
What Greater Beauty THere NoWThen
Than Dance Song Art Seeing Evermore
Soul
Shores
BRinG
Living Trees Ever Green
NoW Shall We Dream Singularity
SoulS on Pages Yes Dance Song BreatheS
on… Footprints Souls All Reach More This
Love Breath BreatheS oN Roots VineS One…
Leaves
Scattered
Gathered
Re-Arranged BREaTHE Green
Lamps Lit Christmas Trees
Forevermore Colors New
NoW Now now
SMiles
New Have A Lovely
Midnight Newer Moon Dear Samreen
On Qatar Beaches Thanks Always Now
So iNSPiRinG YouR Poetry Prints Dance Sing..:)
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“Every wave will wash over creating new shores “.. I love this line 😊
Certainly, our existence will vanish from this world but only deeds and memories will remain and that too if we did something worthwhile.
Actually, people don’t appreciate you when you are alive but as you are gone, everyone says.. He/she was a good man/woman. 😊 But unfortunately, the concerned person never will hear your thoughts. 🙂
Thank you soo much Fred for your lovely lovely words always 🌺
Have a wonderful week ahead✨🌻🌟
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SMiLes Dear Samreen i Believe That Humans
Will Naturally Feel More Compassion And
Appreciation For Most Every Human
When Their Work of Life
Centers Around Actual
Human Connections
With Warmth and
Not So Much
Cold Analytical
Thinking Becoming
More The Tools We Work
With Than the Flesh And Blood
Connections Humans Bring At Least
For me the Beginning Years of my Work-Life
Just Providing Happy Services Brought me so
Much Personal Warmth, Compassion, And Appreciation
For Human Smiles that Touched my Eyes Growing my
Smiles to See A More Human Way of Life Humane As Well…
People First
People First
People First
A Most Beautiful Way of
Life Even Seeing Every Face
As Just Another Pair of Eyes of
God Looking Back At the Breath
of God Living Warm Inside to Radiate
Sunshine Of Love Back Out.. In this
Way
It’s
Beautiful
to Be Human
Truly Worth Breathing for…
Smiles Dear Samreen
i Appreciate You FRiEnD
Each And Every Day We
Meet And Greet As Human…
And Yes i looked forward to Your Kindness
Today For It’s True What Feels the Best is
An Opportunity to Make someone Happy Where
Winds Cross in Kindness And Compassion of Smiles..:)
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et très bonne soirée
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Am late actually to respond to you, apologies 🙂 It’s morning here and I suppose may be early morning or late night wherever you are 😊 Have a blessed night and a wonderful morning 😊✨🌻
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Merci beaucoup et à bientôt de vous lire, très bonne journée
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you so much dear for your time and kind words 😊 Wish you a lovely week 🌺🌻✨
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It’s a pleasure! Have a good week!3💝🌺💖
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Thank you dear😊✨🌻
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It’s a pleasure
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What a lovely poem, Samreen. I adore the last stanza about eternity. Just lovely. It reminds me of a conversation I had about my dad passing last year, and that through my actions, thoughts, feelings, and memories, he lives on. Just lovely, my dear, friend. Have a lovely week, Samreen. 😊❤🙏
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Oh Jeff, thank you sooo much for your kind words always dear friend😊 Indeed, our loved ones always live with us close to our heart and their memories never fade but grow overtime. I can truly understand your emotions for your Dad.
Thank you again dear so mu h and you too have a wonderful week 😊💜🌻🌺
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You’re very welcome, Samreen, always my pleasure. Always. Yes, I too think that is so, they move with us, and through us. Lovely. Be well, my dear, friend. ❤️😊🙏
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Yes they surely do😊 you too be well dear🙂 Jeff, I commented on some 3 or 4 of your posts yesterday but I don’t know why they are not published, do check your spam, may be they are resting there😀
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Thank you so much Ned 😊 Have a good day🌺
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Thank you, Samreen. Ah, I’m so glad you mentioned that to me. I will check. Thank you, Samreen. 😊😊🙏❤️
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Beautiful! I like it very much!
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Thanks so much for your time and kind words 😊 Glad you liked it🙂
Have a good day 🌺✨🌻
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Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you soo much Astha for your kind words ❤️❤️❤️ Means a lot🥰 Have a great day, hope you are doing well 🤗
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Habeebity! So sorry I never saw your poem, this beautiful poem, that you posted now days ago! Well, to say it’s from your heart is little..it’s right from the soul of you, that knows that when you surrender to the next stage, all will still go on without your presence, but you also know, those who loved you and who you loved, will hold you in their hearts and beautiful words that you laid down, and left here for us to read, will be your poetic memory and your legend, even for those who did not have the pleasure of knowing you in life.. I love that feeling of quiet surrender and acceptance in this poem, and I too agree and feel the same about my life..Big hugs and best wishes for you and please keep these beautiful poems, coming and materializing on your page for many many years to come.. You are such a beautiful person, inside and out…Love and light! Allah ma3k UmAnzar! ❤️🤗🌹🌺🌼💐🌸❤️
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UmJulian, you write with so much perfection throwing light to whatever I write in the best possible way❤️❤️❤️ I love you for that and for what you are🥰 JazakAllah khair habeebity, am sooo happy you liked the poem and got so well into the depth of it 🤗 Thank you soo much for your love, kindness and support 😘 love and hugs 🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️
Allah hafiz 🙂💕🌺✨💐💝
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You create a charm and magic around your lyrics . While reading your poems one can visualize those words!!
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You made my day really, am smiling reading your comment 🥰😘😘 Thank you soo much for your love and support ❤️❤️❤️
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Quite captivating….
Wonderful expression of feelings and emotions.
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Thank you bhaijan🤗❤️
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Lovely!
Gwen.
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Beautifully written. I too often think of how things will be when i am not around, when i am gone.
This beautiful poem reminds me of these lines.
Humaare baad ab mehfil mein
Afasaane bayaan honge
Bahaaren ham ko dhundhengi,
Na jaane ham kahaan honge…
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Beautiful lines dear, zabardast ❤️ Yes, dear it is like that, we go deep down into our thoughts what would it be when.. But I guess we should leave that thought aside and enjoy but it comes every now and then.
Thank you dear so mu h for your appreciation. Means a lot❤️🤗
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My pleasure dear ♥️♥️
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