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When I Am Gone

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….. And the wind will blow

Sky shall bear iridescent glow

The birds will croon

The trees will sway

But I would drift away

Not sustaining the brunt of fate

Like a candle in the wind

Like a tender plant in heavy rains

I would embrace the darkness and detach from the soil

Blinded, blended and to be earthed leaving this turmoil

Sympathies, agonies, sorrow will pour in

Eyes would bear tears of farewell

Words will flow like melodies exalting me

Will I be there to hear your notions

I would be sleeping unaware of your emotions

Remember me with every breeze that will touch your face

Forgive me for every ruffle I may have caused

Pardon me for every little scribbles I may have on your wall

Never let me go lost in your archives

For may be there, I can eternally survive

© Samreen Asad 2021

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88 replies on “When I Am Gone”

Dear Samreen Asad

I have to
left at my end
that I
in my body
will perish in the dust

the wind the sky will remain
as if i never been
people will be as usual
wake up in the morning
and render their services to the day

the stars, the moon and the sun
become my shadow
that I threw in my life forgot

the dream will withdraw
into nothing
where he accompanied me day and night

my destiny
my lived life
in the blue sky
in thunderstorms
fade on the high seas

all my evil and other things
my soul becomes my eyes
my ears
my hands
my whole body
me into the eternal night
finally shut off the darkness

all my senses
Feelings
my sensations
my thoughts
my words
everything me
at nature me
i touched
becomes in the last embers
my last breath
fade away in ashes and smoke

only being is eternal
of all creatures
in real life

Best regards
Hans Gamma

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Yes, dear for sure but too much activity as you said is often tiring at times 😀But then, this is their time, once they will grow up we would be just sitting and laughing remembering their actions. ❤️

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Oh Cindy, thank you as always for your ever so wonderful words of encouragement, appreciation, support and love. 🥰🥰🥰💝💝
Indeed, our deeds will be remembered after us, will bring a smile to someone’s face if good and a little discomfort to someone’s thoughts if bad.
So it’s us who need to chose how we want to be remembered 😊🤗
Have a wonderful sleep and may you have a lovely day and the week ahead, love and hugs❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗

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You are so welcome Samreen! It’s so true that words and deeds are powerful and we do get to choose how we show up in life and the impact we want to have on others and ourselves. It truly was beautiful! I’m heading to bed soon and appreciate the lovely good night wishes. You have a wonderful day ahead. Love and hugs back to you!!! ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗

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SMiLes Poetry Dances Sings
Foot Prints in Sand
Every Wave Will
Wash Over Creating

New Shores

Samreen

Breath
Sees to
BREaTHE SoMe
More GRains Sands
HoldS HandS On Beaches Ever More now

SMiLes My FRiEnD Some Hope For Singularity
Fitting Dead WordS iN Machines SoME ThinK NoW

OTHeRS

STiLL

Dance

Sing

Poetry

Free

Beaches

Hold HandS AGAiN

Every Grain Sand

Sugar White See

All Emerald Waves

Breathing Sea Oats Breeze

Sea Gulls Spiraling Souls Sun

High TWiLiGHT Moon Full STill RiSinG

What Greater Beauty THere NoWThen

Than Dance Song Art Seeing Evermore

Soul

Shores

BRinG

Living Trees Ever Green

NoW Shall We Dream Singularity

SoulS on Pages Yes Dance Song BreatheS

on… Footprints Souls All Reach More This

Love Breath BreatheS oN Roots VineS One…

Leaves

Scattered

Gathered

Re-Arranged BREaTHE Green

Lamps Lit Christmas Trees

Forevermore Colors New

NoW Now now

SMiles

New Have A Lovely
Midnight Newer Moon Dear Samreen
On Qatar Beaches Thanks Always Now

So iNSPiRinG YouR Poetry Prints Dance Sing..:)

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“Every wave will wash over creating new shores “.. I love this line 😊
Certainly, our existence will vanish from this world but only deeds and memories will remain and that too if we did something worthwhile.
Actually, people don’t appreciate you when you are alive but as you are gone, everyone says.. He/she was a good man/woman. 😊 But unfortunately, the concerned person never will hear your thoughts. 🙂
Thank you soo much Fred for your lovely lovely words always 🌺
Have a wonderful week ahead✨🌻🌟

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SMiLes Dear Samreen i Believe That Humans
Will Naturally Feel More Compassion And
Appreciation For Most Every Human

When Their Work of Life
Centers Around Actual
Human Connections
With Warmth and

Not So Much
Cold Analytical
Thinking Becoming
More The Tools We Work

With Than the Flesh And Blood
Connections Humans Bring At Least
For me the Beginning Years of my Work-Life
Just Providing Happy Services Brought me so
Much Personal Warmth, Compassion, And Appreciation
For Human Smiles that Touched my Eyes Growing my
Smiles to See A More Human Way of Life Humane As Well…

People First

People First

People First

A Most Beautiful Way of
Life Even Seeing Every Face
As Just Another Pair of Eyes of
God Looking Back At the Breath
of God Living Warm Inside to Radiate
Sunshine Of Love Back Out.. In this

Way

It’s

Beautiful

to Be Human

Truly Worth Breathing for…

Smiles Dear Samreen

i Appreciate You FRiEnD

Each And Every Day We

Meet And Greet As Human…

And Yes i looked forward to Your Kindness

Today For It’s True What Feels the Best is

An Opportunity to Make someone Happy Where

Winds Cross in Kindness And Compassion of Smiles..:)

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What a lovely poem, Samreen. I adore the last stanza about eternity. Just lovely. It reminds me of a conversation I had about my dad passing last year, and that through my actions, thoughts, feelings, and memories, he lives on. Just lovely, my dear, friend. Have a lovely week, Samreen. 😊❤🙏

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Oh Jeff, thank you sooo much for your kind words always dear friend😊 Indeed, our loved ones always live with us close to our heart and their memories never fade but grow overtime. I can truly understand your emotions for your Dad.
Thank you again dear so mu h and you too have a wonderful week 😊💜🌻🌺

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Yes they surely do😊 you too be well dear🙂 Jeff, I commented on some 3 or 4 of your posts yesterday but I don’t know why they are not published, do check your spam, may be they are resting there😀

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Habeebity! So sorry I never saw your poem, this beautiful poem, that you posted now days ago! Well, to say it’s from your heart is little..it’s right from the soul of you, that knows that when you surrender to the next stage, all will still go on without your presence, but you also know, those who loved you and who you loved, will hold you in their hearts and beautiful words that you laid down, and left here for us to read, will be your poetic memory and your legend, even for those who did not have the pleasure of knowing you in life.. I love that feeling of quiet surrender and acceptance in this poem, and I too agree and feel the same about my life..Big hugs and best wishes for you and please keep these beautiful poems, coming and materializing on your page for many many years to come.. You are such a beautiful person, inside and out…Love and light! Allah ma3k UmAnzar! ❤️🤗🌹🌺🌼💐🌸❤️

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UmJulian, you write with so much perfection throwing light to whatever I write in the best possible way❤️❤️❤️ I love you for that and for what you are🥰 JazakAllah khair habeebity, am sooo happy you liked the poem and got so well into the depth of it 🤗 Thank you soo much for your love, kindness and support 😘 love and hugs 🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️
Allah hafiz 🙂💕🌺✨💐💝

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Beautifully written. I too often think of how things will be when i am not around, when i am gone.

This beautiful poem reminds me of these lines.

Humaare baad ab mehfil mein
Afasaane bayaan honge
Bahaaren ham ko dhundhengi,
Na jaane ham kahaan honge…

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Beautiful lines dear, zabardast ❤️ Yes, dear it is like that, we go deep down into our thoughts what would it be when.. But I guess we should leave that thought aside and enjoy but it comes every now and then.
Thank you dear so mu h for your appreciation. Means a lot❤️🤗

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