In a deluge of rain, I often get washed away
Flowing along the waters
To unknown destinations of its own predilection
Rubbing and bruising my skin against the boulders
Wounding my confidence
Paralyzing my thoughts
Decapitating my demeanor
To only flow and flow
Like a paper boat
The ultimate fate of which is to let the water gush in
I immerse in the destiny’s fiasco
Allowing to swallow my existence
What If, not fall and drift with the rain
Not surrender to bruises and pains
Instead, be a ray of sunlight
Courageous to enter the dense droplet
To fight, not bow but bend
To reflect my treasures
Believe in my abilities
Have faith in The “Only One”
And disperse to come out
Splitting a wide spectrum
Of shades of fortitude
Into a VIBGYOR
To shine across the sky
Vibrantly, coherently
Evincing the world
The Rainbow me.
Β© Samreen Asad 2021
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86 replies on “Rainbow”
Beautiful expression Samreen..
Yes, it is the choice one exercises ,to flow with the current or stand and be a rainbow which gives direction to life.
Stay blessed always.
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Thank you so much Jas for your visit and glad you liked the poem. π You too be safe and stay blessed π·π»πΌ
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What will make this poem a literary natural masterpiece if what is answer to:
What is the most wonderful and beautiful??
*The Spectrum of the Rainbow* or *The blazing Colors of Autumn*?
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Thank you so much for time reading and leaving a comment π
Both are wonderful natural phenomena, each having its own very significance. While Rainbow spectrum shows us how beautifully the colors blend together yet carrying their individuality, it shows us not to be disheartened and wait for it to appear after a shower of rain.
While blazing colors of autumn can be perceived in so many different ways, the beauty of the fallen leaves is analogous to our life, we live and then the time comes when we will have to fall and perish. I wrote a poem on autumn as well titled “The fall”, would be happy if you will go through it as well.
https://unlockingthehiddenme.org/2020/10/09/the-fall/
Thank you again for your visit.
Stay blessed!! ππ·πΌ
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A genius answer and a good comparison that contrast the difference and thank you kindly!
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Thank you dear so muchππ· Stay blessed!!
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Thank you as well and all is well where I literary dwell!
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Beautifully written, Samreen!
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Thank you soo mu h Shweta for your visit and kind words happy you liked the poem. π Take care, stay blessed and have a nice day π€π·πΌ
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My pleasure π
I hope you have a great day too π
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This is such a beautiful poem Samreen β¨
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Thank you so much dear for your visit and leaving a comment. ππ» Have a wonderful Sunday!! πΊπ·
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Excellent write..!
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Oh thank you sooo much Filarance for visiting and your appreciation β€οΈ Take care, stay blessed!! Happy sundayππ·πΊ
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Aww..! It’s my pleasure..! You’re very welcome..! Will always visit your site..! Happy Sunday..!
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Oh that is sooo kind of you dear, thank you so much. will keep visiting you as wellππ Have a lovely week ahead π
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Wow..! It’s so nice to hear from you..! Thanks and welcome..! Have a beautiful week..!π
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Thank you dearππΊπ·
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My pleasure..!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you so much for your visit and leaving in a kind comment. π Glad you liked the poem. Have a great day!! π·πΊπ»
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Vos textes sont toujours aussi tendrement positifs, merci beaucoup
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Thank you for always reading my work and your kind appreciation, means alot π Stay blessed, happy Sunday!! π»πΊπ·
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Samreen, this is so beautiful. Full of hope, resilience, self-awareness, and love. I love this poem, my dear friend. β€οΈπΊππ€π»
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Oh Jeff, as always so happy to read your commentπ π Your words always mean so much. Hope you are doing well!! Take care, be safe and have a wonderful Sunday!! πΊπ»π·πΌ
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You’re most welcome, dear Samreen. It is always a pleasure and treat to me to read your lovely words. Love them. I am well and hope you are too, my friend. Thank you. Have a lovely week! β€πΈπ€πΉπ¦
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You are so kind Jeff alwaysππ Am good too dear, thank youπ You too have a lovely week aheadπΊπΌπ·
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This poem told us to find hope in despair. This was beautiful, Samreen. The pictures took me to another world:)
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Your visit and words of appreciation propels me to write further always. Thank you soo much for your support β€οΈπ€β€οΈ Stay blessed, happy Sunday!! π·π»πΌπΊ
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Thank you soo much for taking out your time and comment. Your appreciation means a lot, thank you for always reading my work.
Stay blessed and safe, happy Sunday!! ππ»πΊπ·
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True Accepting
All We Are Now
Pleasure or Pain
Numb Or All Colors
More iS A Way To At Least
Stay Afloat Dear Samreen WHere
We Are… Yet Flow oF All Seeks Sails
Catching Wind Waves All We SeeK NoW
Ocean All One And Same Whole Water
Low or High FLoWinG FRiEnDS With Gravity All
Tree oF Life
Or Lamps
Still To Come
Rainbows Indeed
Colors Penetrating All We aRe NoW..:)
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Rainbow shall come soon or the hope of its coming in the future is keeping us alive and mindful. And it does in the times of despair otherwise it would have been difficult to cope up with our situations. Faith keeps us alive.πππ» Thank you sooo much Fred for always visiting, reading and commenting, you don’t know but i really wait for your comment π Means a lot, always. Hope you and your beautiful wife are doing well!!
Take care, be safe and have a wonderful sundayπΌπ·πΊπ»
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SMiLes Dear Samreen Your Poems Are Always
A Treasure As They Take me Back to Places
So Worth Visiting in Life
For Surely i’ve Had
To Get Used to Some
Cuts And Bruises Along The
Way Yet With Enough Practice
What i Find is We Humans if We Just
Don’t Give Up Will Find A Way to Get Through
Truly With Our Basic Survival Instinct of Will
Even if Every Ounce of Hope and Love Seems
Lost Forever Now For There is Change A
Greatest Gift And This too Shall
Pass For Gratitude of
Heaven We Hold
Within Now to Give and Share Now
Caring Freely With All And Also Change For
All the Numb and Pain If We Just Keep Breathing
Putting One Word in Front of Another Word Next And
Foot Steps on the Beach Until We Leave Prints Again
Worth Loving
Dancing
Singing
to Other
Souls Now
Enough Complete Whole
Again in Humanity’s Loving Way
SMiLes Dear Samreen It’s Very Sweet
That you Look Forward to my Comments
And True i Look Forward to Sharing Them
With You In Caring Ways of Human Soul Every
Bit As Much mY
FRiEnD
With
SMiLes
Of Course
As it’s True in Some
Places of the World
My Words Flow
Meaningless
For Some
See No
Soul in my Words…
And That’s Okay i Learn
So Much From Folks Different than me too…
The Most Special Part of Life is Touching Someone Else’s Soul…
So Far Beyond it Will be For What Most Folks Perceive as Existence…
Of Course i Realize This as i Once Viewed Life One Way Back Through
An Opaque Window Glass Soul Nice to Be Set SoUL Free It is Dear FRiEnD..:)
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Soo kind of you to say that Fred, am grateful reallyππΌ yes, we learn so much from the folks all around as I have learnt so much from you as well through your perspective of life as I get a little glimpse of yours via your comments. It’s always my pleasure to read them. True, We learn as we stroll in life further. Smiles Fred, stay blessed alwaysπΊπ
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SMiles Dear Samreen
Canβt See Any Virtue
Greater Than Kindness
From What i
See Samreen
Defines This Virtue
No Greater Gift Is Receive
This
Give of
Kindness Indeed
Stay Blessed in
Kind
my FRiEnDπβΊοΈπ€
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Thank you dear Fred, you too stay blessed ππ·πΊπ»
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A wonderful write, Samreen! Nice to see your posts after a while… stay blessed always my dear πΉπ
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Oh thank you soo much Diana for your visit, am so happy seeing you here. β€οΈπ€β€οΈ Hope you and your son are doing well!! Thank you again and May God always shower his blessings upon you and your family πΉπ₯°πΉ
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Beautiful poem Samreen, very beautiful. I loved the analogy of a rainbow to come out victorious.
And I also loved the analogy of paper boats flowing with the tide, whose eventual destiny is to have the water rush in. Never pictured it like that.
Floating paper boats on streams brought back beautiful memories from childhood π
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Thank you so much Deb for your kind words and sharing your thoughts. Glad you liked the poem. Yes, those days were so wonderful, floating paper boats, making paper aeroplanes as well π beautiful memories.
Take care dear, stay safe and happy!! πΊ
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Wow Samreenβ£οΈ
That was worth the wait.
Soooo poetically delivered with a beautiful message that no matter where we are we can immerse and flow with it and come back surrendered, letting go and trusting our faith with carry us.
Love these lines:
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“To reflect my treasures
Believe in my abilities
Have faith in The βOnly Oneβ
And disperse to come out
Splitting a wide spectrum
Of shades of fortitude
Into a VIBGYOR
To shine across the sky
Vibrantly, coherently
Evincing the world
The Rainbow me.”
Have a beautiful day my rainbow friendπππππππβ€οΈππ
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Sooo happy to see you here lighthouse β€οΈ Thank you sooo much for your wonderful wordsπ€π€ππ Hope you are doing well dear, just take care of yours and do what seems right. Read your last post, commented as well but i can truly understand its too difficult to juggle everything together and in the process many a things gets missed. I too have limited my posts as you know, it does decrease your follower count and other things but it’s ok, when people like you come and comment all the purpose is achieved π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thank you again so much dearπ₯°
You too have a beautiful week ahead, love and hugs β€οΈπ₯°π€π€π₯°β€οΈ
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Oh it’s always my pleasure and I look forward to your writing Samreen and was happy to read you! Pleasure. I’m well my dear and thanks for the wishes that are well received.
Oh what’s in a number… I agree we must focus on what matters most and releasing the pressure is the key to being happy.
Thanks for the wishes and you too. Again beautiful poem. πππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππ
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It’s all your kindness dearβ€οΈ Thank you soo much π€π€π€ Numbers really never matter, what gives you pleasure are those beautiful comments from beautiful people π You take your time dear, foremost important is your health and your own personal space, you will get the things sorted. And you will always find me visiting your blogs. π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Oh it’s my pleasure always Samreen!
You’re welcome and you’re soooo right about that. Thanks for the encouragement and very kind hearted messages. Yes, we always do sort it out. That is so kind and you will always find me at your as well.
Have a beautiful eveningππππ
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Thank you always for being what you are π₯° We all love you π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈ Have a blessed day πΉπΉπΉ
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That is so kind… thank you.. not sure what else I could be so I’m glad it’s appreciated.. πβ£οΈπππππ€
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Happy anniversary again dear,, Enjoy!! ππΉπΉπΉπ
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Thanks sooooo much for that πππ€π€π€
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Wow…somehow I missed the Rainbow You…oh I love this flow downstream , finally converting bruises and pain to the wide spectrum of color and vibration.. You are are so deep and thoughtful about Life, your Life, and how The Only knows the Only way to help you make that conversion from pain and rudder-less drifting to purpose and light..Let your colors shine UmAnzar..you are a solid gem that reflects the best we can hope for..You can’t even help it…it’s just you!ππβ€οΈπ¦πΉπΊπ
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You know habeebity, if you would have told this to me in person I would be blushing, I don’t know how to respond when someone praises me, I go blank. So grateful for Your words, your kindness habeebity, thank you sooo much π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Stay happy and blessed UmJulian, you are always in my thoughts πβ€οΈπ₯°π
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…and you are always in mine..Jazak Allah UmAnzarπβ€οΈπ€πΉπΊ
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Wonderful postπππ
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Thank you so much Prakash for your visit and appreciation, glad you liked the postππ·πΊ Have a lovely week aheadπΌ
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So beautiful, inspiring and hopeful….just what’s needed in today’s time and day…. wonderful piece Samreen ποΈπ
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Thank you soo much G. for your visit and such kind words of appreciation π so happy you liked the poemπ Stay blessed and have a wonderful week ahead πΊπΌπ·
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Lovely!
Gwen.
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Thank you Gwen so mu h for your visit and appreciation, means a lotπ Stay blessed!! Have a great day and the week aheadπ€
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am amazing insightful view of life … we can all choice which we prefer! The rainbow option will suit me, great writing Samreen π
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Yes dear, we do of course can choose!! Thank you dear soo much for visiting and appreciating, means a lot!! Take care, shine always like a rainbow πβ¨π
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Thank you so much Jonathan π
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MOSTT WELCOME ARE YOU!
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SMiles Dear Samreen
Been Missing Your Inspiring
Poetry Been Awhile Hope All
Is Still Blessings in Your Life mY FRiEnD…:)
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Smiles dear Fred
Sooo happy to see your message ππ Actually, a month back I fell and badly sprained my foot, was on bed rest but you can imagine how it’s possible with a naughty toddler around. π Now, am back on my legs walking on my own but still can’t run after my little one.π Hopefully, soon will. π
It’s really soo kind of you dear, your message made me so happy. π
I will surely post this Saturday.
How have you been Fred??
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Oh Dear Samreen i Feel
Sad For Your Fall And Am
So Glad Your Foot Is
Mending Well And
Yes Hehe i too
Will Ignore Rest
When i Injure Myself
Too For Whatever Pressing
Dance
Joy Comes
Next Fortunately
Nothing Too Severe
Injuries indeed May
Limit So Much Yet
Happily Anticipating
Return of Your Inspiring
Poetry This Weekend Always
Love to See the Unlocking
The Hidden me Notification
Ringing
On Saturday
my FRiEnD SMiLes
i Am Doing Better
Than Ever
Before Yet
Of Course
In Onlyπ€
Joy of Now
With SMilesβΊοΈππΌπ
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Yes fortunately nothing severe, all is part of life π That’s sooo sweet of you Fred. Means so much, really. I didn’t know you wait for my poems (though I know I don’t write that well) , am truly grateful and obliged.
And I sooo love your lovely and inspiring comments alwaysπ
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Hehe Your Modesty
Is Stellar And So
Is Your Poetry
Dear Samreen
Every Saturday
iβve Looked For
Your Poetry Since
i Met You Very
Concerned The
Weeks You Went
Missing
You Are
A Kind
Person
And That
Virtue of
Humanity is
Sadly Muted Many
Places i Visit Yet India
Has Been
An Exception
And Of Course
Qatar Too Stay
Kind
Flourishing
Colors Of Soulππ¦πΆ
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I am not being modest dear, just being truthful π
Kindness is what you are filled up with Fred, such a kind hearted person, difficult to find these daysππΊπ· Stay blessed always ππ»πΌπΈ
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One May ALWaYS
Find KiN iN KiNDNeSS
When
Humanity
Breathes
Dear FRiEnD
Samreen
Gardened By
Loving Motherβs Most
Best Home Work to DoβΊοΈ
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I found it so so beautiful … Keep writing …
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