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In a deluge of rain, I often get washed away

Flowing along the waters

To unknown destinations of its own predilection

Rubbing and bruising my skin against the boulders

Wounding my confidence

Paralyzing my thoughts

Decapitating my demeanor

To only flow and flow

Like a paper boat

The ultimate fate of which is to let the water gush in

I immerse in the destiny’s fiasco

Allowing to swallow my existence

What If, not fall and drift with the rain

Not surrender to bruises and pains

Instead, be a ray of sunlight

Courageous to enter the dense droplet

To fight, not bow but bend

To reflect my treasures

Believe in my abilities

Have faith in The “Only One”

And disperse to come out

Splitting a wide spectrum

Of shades of fortitude

Into a VIBGYOR

To shine across the sky

Vibrantly, coherently

Evincing the world

The Rainbow me.

© Samreen Asad 2021

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What will make this poem a literary natural masterpiece if what is answer to:
What is the most wonderful and beautiful??
*The Spectrum of the Rainbow* or *The blazing Colors of Autumn*?

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Thank you so much for time reading and leaving a comment 😊
Both are wonderful natural phenomena, each having its own very significance. While Rainbow spectrum shows us how beautifully the colors blend together yet carrying their individuality, it shows us not to be disheartened and wait for it to appear after a shower of rain.
While blazing colors of autumn can be perceived in so many different ways, the beauty of the fallen leaves is analogous to our life, we live and then the time comes when we will have to fall and perish. I wrote a poem on autumn as well titled “The fall”, would be happy if you will go through it as well.
https://unlockingthehiddenme.org/2020/10/09/the-fall/
Thank you again for your visit.
Stay blessed!! 😊🌷🌼

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You’re most welcome, dear Samreen. It is always a pleasure and treat to me to read your lovely words. Love them. I am well and hope you are too, my friend. Thank you. Have a lovely week! ❤🌸🤗🌹🦋

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Thank you soo much for taking out your time and comment. Your appreciation means a lot, thank you for always reading my work.
Stay blessed and safe, happy Sunday!! 🙂🌻🌺🌷

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True Accepting

All We Are Now

Pleasure or Pain

Numb Or All Colors

More iS A Way To At Least

Stay Afloat Dear Samreen WHere

We Are… Yet Flow oF All Seeks Sails

Catching Wind Waves All We SeeK NoW

Ocean All One And Same Whole Water

Low or High FLoWinG FRiEnDS With Gravity All

Tree oF Life

Or Lamps

Still To Come
Rainbows Indeed
Colors Penetrating All We aRe NoW..:)

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Rainbow shall come soon or the hope of its coming in the future is keeping us alive and mindful. And it does in the times of despair otherwise it would have been difficult to cope up with our situations. Faith keeps us alive.😊🙂🌻 Thank you sooo much Fred for always visiting, reading and commenting, you don’t know but i really wait for your comment 🙂 Means a lot, always. Hope you and your beautiful wife are doing well!!
Take care, be safe and have a wonderful sunday🌼🌷🌺🌻

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SMiLes Dear Samreen Your Poems Are Always
A Treasure As They Take me Back to Places
So Worth Visiting in Life

For Surely i’ve Had

To Get Used to Some

Cuts And Bruises Along The
Way Yet With Enough Practice

What i Find is We Humans if We Just

Don’t Give Up Will Find A Way to Get Through

Truly With Our Basic Survival Instinct of Will

Even if Every Ounce of Hope and Love Seems

Lost Forever Now For There is Change A

Greatest Gift And This too Shall

Pass For Gratitude of

Heaven We Hold

Within Now to Give and Share Now

Caring Freely With All And Also Change For

All the Numb and Pain If We Just Keep Breathing

Putting One Word in Front of Another Word Next And

Foot Steps on the Beach Until We Leave Prints Again

Worth Loving
Dancing
Singing

to Other
Souls Now

Enough Complete Whole

Again in Humanity’s Loving Way

SMiLes Dear Samreen It’s Very Sweet

That you Look Forward to my Comments

And True i Look Forward to Sharing Them

With You In Caring Ways of Human Soul Every

Bit As Much mY

FRiEnD

With
SMiLes

Of Course

As it’s True in Some

Places of the World

My Words Flow

Meaningless

For Some

See No
Soul in my Words…

And That’s Okay i Learn
So Much From Folks Different than me too…
The Most Special Part of Life is Touching Someone Else’s Soul…

So Far Beyond it Will be For What Most Folks Perceive as Existence…

Of Course i Realize This as i Once Viewed Life One Way Back Through
An Opaque Window Glass Soul Nice to Be Set SoUL Free It is Dear FRiEnD..:)

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Soo kind of you to say that Fred, am grateful really🙂🌼 yes, we learn so much from the folks all around as I have learnt so much from you as well through your perspective of life as I get a little glimpse of yours via your comments. It’s always my pleasure to read them. True, We learn as we stroll in life further. Smiles Fred, stay blessed always🌺😊

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Oh thank you soo much Diana for your visit, am so happy seeing you here. ❤️🤗❤️ Hope you and your son are doing well!! Thank you again and May God always shower his blessings upon you and your family 🌹🥰🌹

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Beautiful poem Samreen, very beautiful. I loved the analogy of a rainbow to come out victorious.
And I also loved the analogy of paper boats flowing with the tide, whose eventual destiny is to have the water rush in. Never pictured it like that.
Floating paper boats on streams brought back beautiful memories from childhood 💖

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Thank you so much Deb for your kind words and sharing your thoughts. Glad you liked the poem. Yes, those days were so wonderful, floating paper boats, making paper aeroplanes as well 🙂 beautiful memories.
Take care dear, stay safe and happy!! 🌺

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Wow Samreen❣️
That was worth the wait.
Soooo poetically delivered with a beautiful message that no matter where we are we can immerse and flow with it and come back surrendered, letting go and trusting our faith with carry us.
Love these lines:
💖
“To reflect my treasures

Believe in my abilities

Have faith in The “Only One”

And disperse to come out

Splitting a wide spectrum

Of shades of fortitude

Into a VIBGYOR

To shine across the sky

Vibrantly, coherently

Evincing the world

The Rainbow me.”

Have a beautiful day my rainbow friend💖💖👏👏👏👏🙏❤️😇😇

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Sooo happy to see you here lighthouse ❤️ Thank you sooo much for your wonderful words🤗🤗💖💖 Hope you are doing well dear, just take care of yours and do what seems right. Read your last post, commented as well but i can truly understand its too difficult to juggle everything together and in the process many a things gets missed. I too have limited my posts as you know, it does decrease your follower count and other things but it’s ok, when people like you come and comment all the purpose is achieved 🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you again so much dear🥰
You too have a beautiful week ahead, love and hugs ❤️🥰🤗🤗🥰❤️

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Oh it’s always my pleasure and I look forward to your writing Samreen and was happy to read you! Pleasure. I’m well my dear and thanks for the wishes that are well received.
Oh what’s in a number… I agree we must focus on what matters most and releasing the pressure is the key to being happy.
Thanks for the wishes and you too. Again beautiful poem. 💖💖💖👏👏❤️❤️❤️🌈🌈🌈🌈

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It’s all your kindness dear❤️ Thank you soo much 🤗🤗🤗 Numbers really never matter, what gives you pleasure are those beautiful comments from beautiful people 💖 You take your time dear, foremost important is your health and your own personal space, you will get the things sorted. And you will always find me visiting your blogs. 🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️

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Oh it’s my pleasure always Samreen!
You’re welcome and you’re soooo right about that. Thanks for the encouragement and very kind hearted messages. Yes, we always do sort it out. That is so kind and you will always find me at your as well.
Have a beautiful evening💖💖💖💖

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Wow…somehow I missed the Rainbow You…oh I love this flow downstream , finally converting bruises and pain to the wide spectrum of color and vibration.. You are are so deep and thoughtful about Life, your Life, and how The Only knows the Only way to help you make that conversion from pain and rudder-less drifting to purpose and light..Let your colors shine UmAnzar..you are a solid gem that reflects the best we can hope for..You can’t even help it…it’s just you!🔆🌈❤️🦋🌹🌺🔆

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You know habeebity, if you would have told this to me in person I would be blushing, I don’t know how to respond when someone praises me, I go blank. So grateful for Your words, your kindness habeebity, thank you sooo much 🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️ Stay happy and blessed UmJulian, you are always in my thoughts 😊❤️🥰😘

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Smiles dear Fred
Sooo happy to see your message 😊🙂 Actually, a month back I fell and badly sprained my foot, was on bed rest but you can imagine how it’s possible with a naughty toddler around. 😅 Now, am back on my legs walking on my own but still can’t run after my little one.😀 Hopefully, soon will. 🙂
It’s really soo kind of you dear, your message made me so happy. 😊
I will surely post this Saturday.
How have you been Fred??

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Oh Dear Samreen i Feel
Sad For Your Fall And Am
So Glad Your Foot Is
Mending Well And
Yes Hehe i too
Will Ignore Rest
When i Injure Myself
Too For Whatever Pressing

Dance

Joy Comes
Next Fortunately
Nothing Too Severe

Injuries indeed May
Limit So Much Yet

Happily Anticipating
Return of Your Inspiring

Poetry This Weekend Always
Love to See the Unlocking

The Hidden me Notification

Ringing
On Saturday

my FRiEnD SMiLes

i Am Doing Better

Than Ever

Before Yet
Of Course

In Only🤗
Joy of Now
With SMiles☺️🙏🎼🙌

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Yes fortunately nothing severe, all is part of life 😊 That’s sooo sweet of you Fred. Means so much, really. I didn’t know you wait for my poems (though I know I don’t write that well) , am truly grateful and obliged.
And I sooo love your lovely and inspiring comments always😊
🌺🌻🌷

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Hehe Your Modesty
Is Stellar And So
Is Your Poetry
Dear Samreen

Every Saturday
i’ve Looked For
Your Poetry Since
i Met You Very
Concerned The
Weeks You Went

Missing

You Are
A Kind
Person
And That
Virtue of
Humanity is
Sadly Muted Many
Places i Visit Yet India
Has Been

An Exception
And Of Course
Qatar Too Stay

Kind
Flourishing
Colors Of Soul😊🦋🎶

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I am not being modest dear, just being truthful 😀
Kindness is what you are filled up with Fred, such a kind hearted person, difficult to find these days😊🌺🌷 Stay blessed always 🙂🌻🌼🌸

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